Reviews for The Curse of Wanting
fictitious facades chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
in the third to last line, do you mean "above HIS head?". other than that, great job. i love the "like a blue sky filled with no stars / but rather / the city's lights." that flawlessly beautiful.
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Bamboti chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
dont c y its PG, o well. Cool, loved how it all comes together.
recalcitrant chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
awesome poem. i liked it a lot. maybe it was an accident but u wrote "above him head" u prob just meant his

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