Reviews for Daddy
speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
"when I leaned to negotiate

peace"

my favorit by far, of many things.
Jeannie-Redd chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Very emotional and powerful. Incredible job. I wish I could say more but I can't seem to articulate it. Amazing is the only thing I can think of.

Jeannie-Redd
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
One of your more emotional pieces.D.
lyingdreamer chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
wow...I just forgot all of my pretty little adjectives.
Bamboti chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
wow, also powerful and sad. well worded and written. keep it up!
CA
shortalee chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Damn girl...i know about this..which made it so much...harder for me to read...u blew me away with this...i am so happy u wrote it out...i hope that helped with past issues...
live2rideforever chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
wow. . well written. . amazing job. .hope you continue to write!
aleppine chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
This is so heartfelt. It's very personal but still lets a reader step into right into it. I really liked these lines:

'My father

has always been a shell of a man

who after an argument

denied that it ever happened.'

'Now,

as your old body withers,

droops,

dies,

you’re to weak to raise a hand to me

or my writings

my words are truth

don’t deny that

even though you’ve taught yourself to forget them.'

I think it struck me because of the subtle reference to the way he had changed - not being able to make denials anymore. The comparison between the two periods is distinct and made me feel hurt-triumphant. That last section - that was brilliant.