|Reviews for Daddy|
| speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
"when I leaned to negotiate
my favorit by far, of many things.
| Jeannie-Redd chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Very emotional and powerful. Incredible job. I wish I could say more but I can't seem to articulate it. Amazing is the only thing I can think of.
| D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
One of your more emotional pieces.D.
| lyingdreamer chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
wow...I just forgot all of my pretty little adjectives.
| Bamboti chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
wow, also powerful and sad. well worded and written. keep it up!
| shortalee chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Damn girl...i know about this..which made it so much...harder for me to read...u blew me away with this...i am so happy u wrote it out...i hope that helped with past issues...
| live2rideforever chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
wow. . well written. . amazing job. .hope you continue to write!
| aleppine chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
This is so heartfelt. It's very personal but still lets a reader step into right into it. I really liked these lines:
has always been a shell of a man
who after an argument
denied that it ever happened.'
as your old body withers,
you’re to weak to raise a hand to me
or my writings
my words are truth
don’t deny that
even though you’ve taught yourself to forget them.'
I think it struck me because of the subtle reference to the way he had changed - not being able to make denials anymore. The comparison between the two periods is distinct and made me feel hurt-triumphant. That last section - that was brilliant.