Reviews for The Strength of Eternity
bookADDICT6 chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I like the beginning so far. It sounds like a good tragedy and personal story, and I can't wait to continue on reading ;)
iCY the Polar Kid chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
So well-written. Every single world in every single line caught me. I'm hook :)

It's sad how Lucas and Melaney both suffered significant lost as they grew apart; they even lost themselves and their friendship.

Really looking forward to the progression of the characters and the story.

Nice, nice.

-PolarBearKid-
AbbeyXD chapter 17 . 6/2/2011
wow okay so I know you haven't updated in a really long time but your note says you were going to finish the story a long time ago and I hope you do! please! update! :)
Binkybaby chapter 18 . 5/31/2011
I loved it! :)
hopelesslycliched chapter 18 . 5/17/2011
WHY WHY WHY did you not finish this? ):
bonnie1md chapter 18 . 4/22/2011
i love this story so much:D you are so good.
MsIloveVampires chapter 18 . 4/17/2011
wow i guess your a first for a lot of things for me, like ive never cried two chapters in a row before from reading something on fanfiction or fictionpress and im pretty sure even from any other story/book

but seriously i realy hope that you will oneday (hopefully really soon) you will finish this story off
MsIloveVampires chapter 17 . 4/17/2011
wow this chapter actually made me cry, like the previous ones my eyes only teared up and i could blink them away, but this time they just rolled down my face and i actually had to get up to go to the bathroom and wipe them away ...

well your amazing and i hope along with Melaney that Elivra is happy and if i were her i think i would also do everything in my power to do so too

i really wish you would finish this story but ... i guess like what Lucas said "Longing doesnt get you anywhere"

hmm the name Lucas brings back lots of memories for me, though with it brought lots of hurt and saddness for me too though not as much as Melaney but it did change me ... though to this day im not sure for the better or worse

and like i said before i really and sincerly wish with all my heart that you WILL finish this story, please and thank you

P.S. i think this is the longest review i've ever written so far, thats how touching this story and chapter are too me and without any emoticons at all not even one
austenqueen chapter 18 . 3/19/2011
you know a story is truly one of your favorites when you cry and laugh on many occasions throughout the story

i can genuinely say with all my heart that this is my favorite story ever
atarram chapter 18 . 3/12/2011
I JUST FOUND THIS STORY ON FICTIONPRESS AND I LOVE IT!
kaelkitty chapter 18 . 2/12/2011
yes! i love this story! is it over? i hope not! I need closure!
jorie chapter 18 . 1/1/2011
this story is great!

i read it all in one go..

and seeing that you haven't updated for years already, i was hoping that this fic was not abandoned..

especially since there's like one more chapter left and an epilogue..

i wish you'd continue this..

please please update this soon...i'd like to read more..

and i'd really appreciate it if you finish this amazing fic of yours...
jorie chapter 12 . 12/31/2010
aw.. natalie and danny's best friend's story seems to be interesting.. :)

nice chapter btw..

seems that lucas and melaney's relationship turned into something a bit more complicated..

plus his mom's back?
mihaela chapter 18 . 12/31/2010
please update son
WickedSauce chapter 18 . 12/19/2010
You HAVE TO UPDATE! please. For the children.
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