Reviews for The Strength of Eternity
miaaa chapter 18 . 8/9/2011
Oh my goodness, there are no words to how much I love this story! I don't know if you're even going to read this, but if you do, I just want you to know that you are an exceptionally talented writer, seriously, I knew I was going to love this story from just the prologue, it's so beautifully written, and your descriptions, especially the beginning paragraph of this chapter, it was just... stunning, honestly, I think I'm speaking on behalf of everyone who's read this story when I say that I can truly feel everything Melaney feels, it's written that perfectly, and I'm probably also speaking on behalf of everyone when I say that I'm gutted you haven't updated in like five years, and I know you've apologized in pretty much every chapter's author note about your lack of updates, so I'm not giving up hope!

I sincerely hope that you will eventually update this, it's too amazingly beautiful to let go, and when you do, I'll be the first to read it.

Congratulations at how talented you are, if this were published, I would buy it, and I hope you can find the time to update this whenever you're ready.

Thank you for such an enjoyable, emotional and amazing read so far.

chantellovesya chapter 10 . 8/8/2011
I hope Shay and Bethy break up? Too much toooo soon and it's just like, too perfect, ya know?
cvbaby250 chapter 18 . 8/1/2011
This story is ridiculously good so far. I've been reading it for most part of the day and I finally finished this chapter knowing that it's not the last chapter. Then I look to see that last date you updated it and that was 4 years ago. I don't want to pry, but PLEASE finish the story. Not later but sooner. A lot of your readers are being left hanging, and I know they are most likely as eager to read the last 2 chapters as I am. :)
miaaa chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Ah, you're not a wimp, I was nearly crying reading this! It's a really beautiful start! Well I'm off the read the next chapter hehe :')
bookADDICT6 chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I like the beginning so far. It sounds like a good tragedy and personal story, and I can't wait to continue on reading ;)
iCY the Polar Kid chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
So well-written. Every single world in every single line caught me. I'm hook :)

It's sad how Lucas and Melaney both suffered significant lost as they grew apart; they even lost themselves and their friendship.

Really looking forward to the progression of the characters and the story.

Nice, nice.

AbbeyXD chapter 17 . 6/2/2011
wow okay so I know you haven't updated in a really long time but your note says you were going to finish the story a long time ago and I hope you do! please! update! :)
Binkybaby chapter 18 . 5/31/2011
I loved it! :)
hopelesslycliched chapter 18 . 5/17/2011
WHY WHY WHY did you not finish this? ):
bonnie1md chapter 18 . 4/22/2011
i love this story so much:D you are so good.
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 18 . 4/17/2011
wow i guess your a first for a lot of things for me, like ive never cried two chapters in a row before from reading something on fanfiction or fictionpress and im pretty sure even from any other story/book

but seriously i realy hope that you will oneday (hopefully really soon) you will finish this story off
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 17 . 4/17/2011
wow this chapter actually made me cry, like the previous ones my eyes only teared up and i could blink them away, but this time they just rolled down my face and i actually had to get up to go to the bathroom and wipe them away ...

well your amazing and i hope along with Melaney that Elivra is happy and if i were her i think i would also do everything in my power to do so too

i really wish you would finish this story but ... i guess like what Lucas said "Longing doesnt get you anywhere"

hmm the name Lucas brings back lots of memories for me, though with it brought lots of hurt and saddness for me too though not as much as Melaney but it did change me ... though to this day im not sure for the better or worse

and like i said before i really and sincerly wish with all my heart that you WILL finish this story, please and thank you

P.S. i think this is the longest review i've ever written so far, thats how touching this story and chapter are too me and without any emoticons at all not even one
austenqueen chapter 18 . 3/19/2011
you know a story is truly one of your favorites when you cry and laugh on many occasions throughout the story

i can genuinely say with all my heart that this is my favorite story ever
atarram chapter 18 . 3/12/2011
kaelkitty chapter 18 . 2/12/2011
yes! i love this story! is it over? i hope not! I need closure!
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