Reviews for Darkness
EWindheim chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Beautiful! I really like this one. You should right more abstract poetry.
IHJ chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
After having my G.P. lecturer mentioning how apathetic society has gone EACH lesson, your summary caught my attention.

Good flow and rhythm. I envy that. Abstract, yeah, (I'm a bit literal-minded), but I think it's well expressed the loneliness in society and how...well, apathetic we've gone. Though once when I fainted in a mall, people DID ask me if I was okay and bought me food to eat and drove me home. :) Rare people you can trust and who come outside their shell.

Izzy J.
Meaningless Julia chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
I like the style of this - the rhyme and the rhythm makes it flow really well which i know is hard thing to do. I like the imagery too, the fire being symbolic of hope. The feeling of apathy and not caring about anything is something we all feel now and again and i think you've expressed it realy well. Well done! :)