Reviews for Illusions
parody of pain chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
beautiful, excellently written i love it, esp. everything after the line "those who want love have it" blew my sox away (prolly ne'er find them!:D) wonderful, wonderful piece...
milady424 chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
love is so complicated and yet so simple...wow thats a good poem...did u get it from a book? Anyways love the poem and i want you to review for me k?

Luvs, ML
lebuffle chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
You've repeated the last line twice. Was that intentional? This poem sounds like a list of definitions, yet they seem controversial. This kind of poem is one to be read when the reader has a lot of time to mull over the definitions in their mind and weigh them up with personal beliefs.