|Reviews for new skin old skin|
| Kelpylion chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
That first/last stanza? Thankyouthankyothankyou! You don't know how perfectly you somehow captured that feeling so...concisely. I'd call it my 'favourite,' but the ones in between count for just as much...
'peel down your skin and find out
if real is the real you wanted to be.'
So, so, so familiar, put so...*Truly*
It takes a couple of readings to find a unified theme in these stanzas...which I deeply like; it resembles human consciousness, where the separate ideas all say 'Yes, this is how I felt, at that very moment.' And you understand it, even if you can't put your finder on it.
Blindingly delicious...how is this 1.5 months old with no reviews?