i really like this so far. your writing style is brilliant and the plot has me really captivated. id give you a longer review but im too desperate to read more. on with the ficcie!

Hey! I started reading this story a few days ago and couldn't stop. It's been ages since I've read something this good at FP, it really has. I loved Erik, and Ria, and Cam, and I was so upset when I thought Erik had died, and then when Ria didn't actually know that he hadn't. And Cam's gorgeous. *grins* Anyway, I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it.

Very good. I liked it. Your style was captivating and very detailed.

absolutely one of the best story's ive ever read.. hoping that there will be a sequel! great job.. loved it ..

Oy! Sweetness! An amazingly amazing ending to an equally amazing story. Lurveled it. And if you ever, ever write a sequel or partner, I am *so* reading it.

Ciao!

Gryph

Ria... Arg. Don't leave, stupid head. Though that would make a dramatic ending, if Erik were to show up out of nowhere...

*stares* Woah. That was cool.

But *Erik*!

Action! w00t! Funfun!

*smiles* Charming. Just... charming.

Sulky Erik. *shakes head* You'd think he'd never get anything done the amount of time he spends sulking. But he's still lurvely...

*grins* Erik the drama queen. An exceedingly accurate description. Poor Cam. Except not quite. There's probably someone lurking out there for him. In a good way, of course.

That was vv good. Really liked the description of the mental passage.

Hell ya! Lots of action! *frowns* *hits space bar a few times.* Damn thing keeps kicking out on me...

Uh-oh. Conall is not exactly the best of omens. But the outfit sounds amazing.

*chuckles* Ah, Cam. He's wonderful, no?