|Reviews for What a mask we wear|
| XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX XXXXX chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Well, after partaking in my habit of clicking away at my favorites and then clicking on other people's favorites when looking for something to read, I found this poem. Anywhoo, it's very nice, but the only real thing that's wrong hear is you use the word "Us" at the end of a sentence four times, which is a bit repetetive, and quite possibly the smallest error I've ever noticed.
| dustytiger chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
this is an amazing peice, i very much enjoyed it, i know i can relate to this, i really like peices about masks cause it's something i like ot write about, and i love to see how others portray it, i really like the way you did, great work keep it up! thanx for the review
| Chicanery A. Beguile chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Strange, yet so true. Which makes it sad. Why do we do these things to ourselves?
| Snooboostoo chapter 1 . 11/18/2003
Very good, and oh so true...I like how you said...Our masks will have consumed us