|Reviews for Drowning|
| singinstrawberri chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
wow, i hope many can feel like that.
its beautiful, i've always looked for such a detailed, warm poem...you can see Him more clearly. i adore this...::adds to favorites:: thanks.. its lovely and full of truth..
| Edraith chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
Wonderful poem. The magnificence of the experience is captured beautifully in your word choice, the intensity comes across really well in your images, and in paradoxes such as "I'm falling fast now
In a whirl of confused elation."
My favourite part is
I feel my whole world shattering
And rebuilding itself on You."
That captures the essence of rebirth, of staking our all on Him. Great poem.
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
~Heart of the Sword
| Hael the Warrior chapter 1 . 11/22/2003
Hey, good poem, reminds me of the song Going Under by evanescence. Please check my poems out under the same name I just haven't signed in yet.
| Alyx Bradford chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
This would be good if it wasn't an unengaging variant on a theme I've seen about a dozen times already.