|Reviews for Jesus Christ Our Savior|
| Needa S chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Great job for your first piece. Keep up the awesome work. Thanks for the review.
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
For one of your first attempts, this is really good.
Heart of the Sword
| Hail the Warrior chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
Very good, liked the last stanza, extremely powerful.
| Alyx Bradford chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
"The serpent's head was smashed
The holy cross was raised"
Good to see that antiquated prejudices are still in place today, though I somehow doubt you quite grasp the significance of the symbolism you used. It escapes many who embrace it.
Simplistic poem. Neither unique nor inventive, and thus not particularly memorable, either.
| soulfulactress chapter 1 . 11/18/2003
so, so true: i just feel sry that half the world as we know it goes: Jesus who? Real sad, how peple wont rely on him. Anyway (sry, i just got back frum church and feel the need to do something truly meanigful in life). But, hey, im done.