Oh...nice. Your words are so powerful..and it's straight to the point. awesome.

Very well done on this poem. It has such wonderful emotion and imagery. And the form of the poem... very clever indeed. With it discreetly being broken up into stanzas of six lines each, with the first lining pertaining to an action (walk, leave, run, glid) and the fourth line pertaining to a part of you (ears, eyes, hands, heart) very very clever indeed. It adds so much more to the depth of the poem, makes it obvious that it wasn't just something you threw out there. This is going on my favorite list just because it's so damn clever and creative. awesome job.