|Reviews for Beaten|
| Glass Clown chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Wow! This made me cry! As a teenager i was in a very bad situation, so i can relate to this.
| stickyelf chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
Wow..I really like your poem. Their is so much emotion behind the words, and it flows so smoothly. I think that all of the word choice was good too, so keep on writting!
| Spatula-Master chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
This is a very powerful poem, it has a deeply haunting and disturbing literal meaning as well as an in depth, suffering meaning showing the multi-faceted sides of the human psyche. As I was reading it, I felt as if I was making a heart to heart link with the character and therefore felt rather depressed at the mentioning of her death. (I only realized until afterwards that she was dead, I was kind of wondering why she was ten inches from the ground... ) Anyway... I LOVE this poem and I hope there are many more to come.
| Tears heal nothing chapter 1 . 11/20/2003
oh wow... i like this... it is awesome! it's exactly how i felt when i was getting beaten up at school. but meh. this is so awesome and it's like words straight from my mouth but not. Great job! keep writing!