| Reviews for Charlotte |
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   JZPG chapter 1 . 11/5/2005 Awesome writing, descriptive words, great job! |
| violetsky23 chapter 8 . 10/21/2005 wow, you're amazing. this is incredible. you have a great imagination. |
| pyraverne chapter 8 . 6/22/2005 Hello again old friend... We need to get in touch huh? Holy _ *fill in with whatever*. This ROX. Truly amazing. The whole "soul for soul-price" thing could be explained a little more though. -Pyra |
| George Daily chapter 8 . 12/5/2004 Wow, WignedAssassin, this is an excelent peice of work! I enjoy the whole story, an excellent peice of writing, and even though the ending is a litlle abrupt, i like it anway... |
| Boadicia chapter 8 . 5/29/2004 I, for one, like the ending of the story. I'm not really sure why but it seems to fit. |
| Iceunia chapter 8 . 4/21/2004 really random ending... put up ur hacker story! |
| Storysmith chapter 8 . 4/15/2004 Hi. SOrry for not reviewing. I'm finding a lot of places I forgot to review today...Oh well. Good job. THe ending does need some work, but I sympathize. I had a story I wrote two or three endings for, thought up hundreds of others, and still don't like the one I have. Oh well. It the writer's 'price'. Good typos or anything! Well, later! Gata de la Noche |
| Taylor Marin chapter 8 . 4/7/2004 Hm... Also not sure this ended in the best way it could have. Accursed writer's block; it's zapped many a great story, including some of my own... Still really, really good, though. Cheers for an incredible story! ~Taylor P.S. It's going on my favorites list. |
| Taylor Marin chapter 6 . 4/7/2004 Aah, now she has a name... -"It's funny. After you die, you remember everything."- My absolute favorite line. |
| Taylor Marin chapter 5 . 4/7/2004 Better than four, but also has a couple rough spots. Can't say more, because I've got to read the rest of this! ~Taylor |
| Taylor Marin chapter 4 . 4/7/2004 Hm... This chapter could stand for a little editting; there were a few places where the wording was kind of confusing, or awkward. At the same time, though, it also contained some of my favorite lines so far. ~Taylor |
| Taylor Marin chapter 3 . 4/7/2004 You amaze me, and this story is amazing. I love the way we don't even know the main character's name, and how she just accepts things unquestioningly and responds in kind. AWESOME. ~Taylor |
| Taylor Marin chapter 1 . 4/7/2004 Wow, this is awesome so far! Really well written, and the sort of thing I could imagine actually reading. I am seriously impressed. ~Taylor |
| Burnt Bread chapter 7 . 1/27/2004 ghosts cant like, die again, can they? |
| Storysmith chapter 7 . 1/18/2004 Hm...interesting chapter. no typos i could find. Well, waiting to see what happens! |