Reviews for Charlotte
JZPG chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Awesome writing, descriptive words, great job!
violetsky23 chapter 8 . 10/21/2005
wow, you're amazing. this is incredible. you have a great imagination.
pyraverne chapter 8 . 6/22/2005
Hello again old friend... We need to get in touch huh? Holy _ *fill in with whatever*. This ROX. Truly amazing. The whole "soul for soul-price" thing could be explained a little more though. -Pyra
George Daily chapter 8 . 12/5/2004
Wow, WignedAssassin, this is an excelent peice of work! I enjoy the whole story, an excellent peice of writing, and even though the ending is a litlle abrupt, i like it anway...
Boadicia chapter 8 . 5/29/2004
I, for one, like the ending of the story. I'm not really sure why but it seems to fit.
Iceunia chapter 8 . 4/21/2004
really random ending...
put up ur hacker story!
Storysmith chapter 8 . 4/15/2004
Hi. SOrry for not reviewing. I'm finding a lot of places I forgot to review today...Oh well. Good job. THe ending does need some work, but I sympathize. I had a story I wrote two or three endings for, thought up hundreds of others, and still don't like the one I have. Oh well. It the writer's 'price'. Good typos or anything! Well, later!
Gata de la Noche
Taylor Marin chapter 8 . 4/7/2004
Hm... Also not sure this ended in the best way it could have. Accursed writer's block; it's zapped many a great story, including some of my own... Still really, really good, though. Cheers for an incredible story!
P.S. It's going on my favorites list.
Taylor Marin chapter 6 . 4/7/2004
Aah, now she has a name...
-"It's funny. After you die, you remember everything."-
My absolute favorite line.
Taylor Marin chapter 5 . 4/7/2004
Better than four, but also has a couple rough spots. Can't say more, because I've got to read the rest of this!
Taylor Marin chapter 4 . 4/7/2004
Hm... This chapter could stand for a little editting; there were a few places where the wording was kind of confusing, or awkward. At the same time, though, it also contained some of my favorite lines so far.
Taylor Marin chapter 3 . 4/7/2004
You amaze me, and this story is amazing. I love the way we don't even know the main character's name, and how she just accepts things unquestioningly and responds in kind. AWESOME.
Taylor Marin chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
Wow, this is awesome so far! Really well written, and the sort of thing I could imagine actually reading. I am seriously impressed.
Burnt Bread chapter 7 . 1/27/2004
ghosts cant like, die again, can they?
Storysmith chapter 7 . 1/18/2004
Hm...interesting chapter. no typos i could find. Well, waiting to see what happens!
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