Reviews for change the sheets
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
an interesting philosophy. i believe that it starts well, comparing subtely changing sheets on a bed to those of life but maybe then, rather than a list, you can continue to use it as a metaphor for life.
Non-existent Puritanism chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
I like your metaphor. It was nice poem, really shows how dirty things can get if you don't clean up every now and then. * stands up to go clean room* Ok, maybe not. *sits back down*