Reviews for Black Clouds of Smoke
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
I like the words and wording of this one...Very beautifully written
Ria Mala chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
Powerful. I like it. Although it's kinda depressing...it reminds me of Sept. 11. The whole black smoke...screaming...enduring it all.
shinco chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
That was very detailed! You did a very nice job with this one! Coolness!
Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
Wonderful metaphors... beautiful poem. I love it. The rhythm is perfect and it flows really well. Great job!
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
I don't think this is about me, so you know thats good for me. But not for you, geez another internet silence, um BOB! Love You ONATOPP