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Believe me when I say
alsdjf
chapter 1 .
11/22/2003
Sao: It's okay. You've written better, but it's not bad, really.
Anni: Not trashing it, just so you know.
~Sao & Anni (aka HOS)
Non-existent Puritanism
chapter 1 .
11/21/2003
It's a little too Lovey Dovey, but it was nicely done.