holy shit. okay definately expected that kayley had a thing for dayin but...wow. wow. i'm just...holy. otherway around (sort of) just..it's soo messed up. i'm going to tell you what somebody once told me (which basically is my favourite sentence in life) "it's fucked up. but it's so beautifully fucked up" and that's exactly what this just unfolds so amazingly and we're learning new things about the characters (cliche statement) but's it's just...okay to sum it up (because i'm gushing, always) it's beautiful. love.

Are you going to just keep going with this? Because really, there isn't much of a plot (although I do like that in this story) yet it's really pretty long, and you've been able to develope the characters so well...

Keep up with this, if only for your readers' amusement. I love this story!

i like it

well all i have to say is: took me fucking long enough to review! what to say that hasn't been said: oh but now you're FUCKING brilliant. not just brilliant. fucking brilliant. you must update (soon...no pressure since i haven't in a couple months). and i still love jehan. a lot.

I am very close to writing you a song about how much I miss you.

-Cat

HI, I love ur stories they are soo good, im completely hooked on them...Personally i dont know why but i like Tristin, he i dont know i guess i feel a lil sad 4 him cuz hes in love with Liv and she just likes him as a friend, that must hurt 4 him to see Jay, Dayin,and Liv being so close. BUT i love Dayin also i think hes wicked awsome and not to mention he sounds really hot._-Mysterious-

hey!i just wont to say this review might be screwed up 'cuz of my computer...lol.i acctulally read all 32chapters in one sitting and i apsoltaly LOVED them!I was actally really courious about 1:what kinda music does bright eyes play? 2:how can you tell if you have DID? 3:do your know what your different persionalities are like? and finally 4:whats the time difference between belgulm and California,USA?My favorite char. are liv and dayin by far... it might be cuz they remind me of me and my guyfriend...loli really love the fact that you don't use qoets i but it makes typing easier lol so about my horrible spelling and run on sent. but i hate english class w/ a pashionlolall i really wanted to say is that i LOVE you storiesyour : why didn't you translate belmont into french for the story you had to write?

I'm still here!

It took me quite some time, what with life and all, but finally, FINALLY, I have finshed all 32 chapters of your vunderful story. Seriously. I loved it. Liv is awesome, Dayin is most intriguing, and I love Jehan. The "feel" to your story is unbelievably...unbelievable, for lack of a better word. Hm. What is Jehan's little quirk? I do not believe it has come up yet...I don't suppose you could hook Nora and Liv up briefly, just for a little twist? Keep writing! Not that I need to tell you that...your stuff is amazing.

damn it! why'd you stop there? I was hoping for some chaos, panic, and disorder this chapter! grr, update soon and I won't stalk you. later

I LOVE THIS SO much.

Oh... Well written so far...

oh god, be prepared, waiting this long for this chapter has giving me a lot to say... to get ready

first i loovvee this story, but i know i should'nt *scarastic voice* oh the drugs the language i think i'll die* but i can't help but savor every word. like a forbiddin pleasure that you want even more just cos you CANT have it.

I have grown up in this toatly first class enviorment, with all the perfect role models, and all the perfect rules, and the perfect people. some of the time i hate it, and some of the time i hate myself for living it. because so many other people should be living it, but aren't

(oh little miss "i want world pecae and all that jazz")

but that also another reason that i love your story so much, because it so different, its refreshing.

and know i bet you just thinking, okaay fucked up little white gurl... but i am, and i'am not, and okay, i'll stop.

just wanted you to know that OTHER people are reading your story, but then again, you may be one of thouse OTHER people... okay... i swear.. i'll stop ah dont ... stop thowing... the... swiffers...

so where ever you are, whoever you are (not that i'am asking) tip of the had and a round of aplause to you.

P.S. i tryed the white glue thing, wicked man, it took a few trys, but oh bue-ti-FUL, if you know what i mean.

and ONE last questions befor i stop, do you ever do any writing in your Others. and if you do, is it like reading someone else's work after wards?

sry if i'am being nosey you can get mad at me if you want to, i think i might deserve it.

OK, Dayin's sis is one of those characters you just really wish would randomly get hit by a bus. Good job!

: yeah, saw em at the coachella festival and plan to see more as soon as humanly possible this june.: nick & conor is teh sex.

Excellent chapter! I always look forward to updates.

-UG88-