This is such an awesome image!

Ending, once again. Wow.

Beautiful. I love the metaphor.

I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. Did I mention I love it? The imagery, especially the last line, is so pretty.

Great metaphor!

Wow.
This is beautiful. I love the concept.

really captures the mood. really lovley imagery. just a really sweet poem. brilliant.

I really liked it, it's short but sais so much. The words are very strong, and beautiful, but im not sure i'll ever feel them.

beautiful

It's so beautiful! Of course it is also reminescent of our favorite series. But I love the end. In four short lines you conveyed what it takes most people to express in pages.

:)

I love it. I find it interesting that you compare a dragonfly in amber to the feeling of awe when you first see that someone.

Keep writing!

-[ Anna ]-

Poetic..Poetic.. very good..i like that poem.(Smile)

Really nice...I like it!

Very nice. I love the idea of a firefly suspended in flight, and you suspended in love.

Really good. The first line was my favorite. Read mine?