...OHMYFREAKINGGOODNESSILOVETHISSTORY :D I love the funny bits, and how Spin affectionately (?) calls Jared 'Asshole.' Honestly, it's also a little Twilight Zone-ish-I have a friend who I'm always fighting with (and secretly have an enormous crush on)...named Jared. Seriously, though, this story made me laugh so hard I'm sure my family thought I was nuts. You're a really good writer-keep it up!

You are, like, seriously AWESOME. you are now officially my idol for the next ten minutes. Tick, tick, tick.

THE ELF IS EXACTLY THE SAME SIZE AS I AM. GRAR! Anyway, I love this story. The rest of them, too, actually.

This book was hilariously AWESOME!

i give you MEGA props!

So freaking cute! I love it! It's so adorable! You did a great job, I loved the characters! And, I can't stop smiling! Gonna check out your other stories now!

Aw, its over. This was a pleasant read; thank you. I can't wait to read the sequel, it sounds interesting from your description here.

This was absolutely cute! Good job! Hehe you know whats funny? I'm A lot like Spin, I don't well with drama and seeing how she dealt with those situations was funny!(-) good job my friend, now I'll read your sequel!

Haha. That was really cute! xD I liked this depiction of Santa and his elves. :] Nice job.

You called Jared Cale.

I TOTALLY JUST REMEMBERED HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY! PIXY-DIZZY, YOU"RE THE BEST!:):):):)

Hi there!

Totally cute story... :)

BTW, looks like you mixed up your characters:

“Don’t bother.” Cale pushed the wing through the ice before bending down to cut the bottom.

Cale doesn't belong in this story :)

thia rocks

Shouldn't there be elf labour or somthing?

:0

Bad Santa!I shall send you coal on Christmas!

COOKIES!

Heres some choc chip cookies

"Unfortunately for me, a couple of weeks ago, I told Santa that maybe it would be better for both him and the other elves if he could get down here and help out a little, instead of being a couch potato and sitting on his ass all day.

I don't think he liked that.

So guess who's stuck doing Christmas Duty this year"

-That's so cute! I Loved this chapter-very sweet sounding story

Hello... I would like to say that I really enjoy your stories. They are quite entertaining, but can you quit inserting your Author's notes every where in the middle of a story? It is really quite irritating. It distracts the reader from the storyline and seems quite juvenile actually.

Sorry to say but, no one really cares what the author feels at a certain point in the story and it is as they say 'ACBC'. 'Act Cute Buey Cute' or you're acting in a very cute manner but it really comes off as not cute at all. If you truly cannot resist having irritating comments, at least place it at the end of the story, so that the reader can enjoy your works thoroughly without interuptions.

As much as this seems like a flame, it's not. It's just that I've been reading your stories and they irritate me to the point that I can't help but comment about it. Hope you take this into consideration. Thanks.