|Reviews for Haunted|
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
aw...this little girl is nothing but an angel in disguise. she is endowed with these unique traits just so she can teach others not to judge. just my opinion, though. anyway, thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. God loves you and so do I!
| Trescha-Geena chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
lovely work havent seen any in a while ;)
| Angel-Lija chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
It's kinda realistic. Afterall, Instine (I might have misspelled that) was considered to be insane so it's just natural that people judge what they can't understand.
| c0nquestri0n chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
reminds me of Rober Don Hughes' "The Fallen." Well, it was enjoyable to read.
| forgotten-magick chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
| Hiana chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
Very nice... good imagery. This is a wonderful poem.
| Senorita Diabla chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
Very cool, I like the imagery you used. I haven't seen this before as a topic, good job.
| Chione chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
Haha, okay it's me again. I'll try not to bother you to much anymore.
Very cute poem, and kinda sad. Very well written. Love the imagery.
Did I mention that I've had a girl read to me a passage in the Bible about demons? And then saying that she knew what I was and that she would resist the temptation of evil?
Laughed my ass off at that, I did.
Great work, as usual. .
| KalliopesMuse chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
Very well written ) It reminds me of the novel I'm writing, well a certain character really who is a young girl and has powers (and unusualy green eyes lol). I'm trying to read your other work. Good job.
| Dahlia Wolffe chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
nice poem. i like the format. as a side note, as a fellow author, i would fly with this idea and write it as a story. well, if u can, please return the favor of R/Ring.
| Andaren chapter 1 . 12/9/2003
Nice poem :) Reminds me of my story 'Childhood Demons' and perhaps of Andaren in 'The Book and the Mirror' because not everyone understands her power.
Oh, I read your Bio ... yay, someone else who likes the Mists of Avalon! :)
| Cody Thomas chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
Ok I don't know how you did it but you have just described my entire childhood. I have goosebumbs now! great job!
| Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
It's unfair to judge kids like that...I mean, just because someone could see spirits doesn't mean they are possessed...
I really liked your poem. Keep writing.
| nimue webweaver chapter 1 . 11/23/2003
beautiful and well written. i used to talk to faeries and things, and although i can no longer completely find the world i once spent most of my waking moments in, i catch glimpses of it now and then. eery but beautiful.
| Spirit Lovelorn chapter 1 . 11/23/2003
Very insightful and simply beautiful. That's all I really have to say.