Reviews for Can't breathe
Ying'zi chan chapter 1 . 11/23/2003
Your point in this poem is very well written, but there are a few mistakes... you'll be able to find them easily, but other than that it's really... emotional?
Faded Reflection chapter 1 . 11/23/2003
Accept yourself first, then that might change. Nice work.
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 11/23/2003
Oh, wow. sometimes I feel exactly the same way. Like I don't fit in any kind of group because I'm not like them. I LOVE this poem.