Reviews for A Bird
Jonathan Kimberley chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
i love it, it really made me laugh. i don't useually like haiku poetry, but this one is different to ones i have read before, i like it better ) well done
Manju chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
haha funny. love the last line. lol
Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Ha I liked the last line, that was funny.
joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
haha, i liked the last part. interesting!
Eckrice chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
haha
Feathery butt.
I likes it. Too stort though. Add another stanza.
May your onions stay sweet,
-Eckrice
FurballofEvilness chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
what fun. keep writing!
Faded Soulfire chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
This poem is so cute! It brought a smile to my face. Normally, I don't read haiku, but i'm starting to enjoy it now. Besides, i have to write a haiku poem for my english class and I must say yours was truly inspirational. _ maybe I'll come up with a good one myself. Great poem!
The L1zard Queen chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Aww, lol feathery butt :B
lebuffle chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Lol! That's cute! The last line rocks!
Veromorphia chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
It's cute! _
I like the "trademark feathery butt" part.
Nice work!
Veromorphia
TiEka Koniku chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
butts rule! lmao. thanx for the complement on my penname. it Japanese.. my nick really. but i love it. keep up the writing. it definately entertaining. *TI*
Melancholy Butterfly chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
Hehehe. . . this little piece of writing is so cute! Especially the last line, "Trademark feathery butt", that gave me the giggles! Well done!
QueenRemge13 chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
LOL, LOL, LOL. :-P
QR
Lucy Ricardo chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
that's pretty good. Short, but good.
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
lol, melikes. you gotta keep writing haikus0)
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