Reviews for mind match
mapofyourhead chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Wow.
The first four lines are really impactful (is that a word? if it isn't, it should be) and they help set up for the rest of the poem. Really beautiful.
pennydeath chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
I like how this is so conversational - like you can just sit there on someone's front porch and talk through this poem, have a completely normal discussion about love. Which I suppose is another point of the title - not just match as in thing that makes fire, but a twin, something that's so close that you CAN just sit and talk.
I don't know. I'm on a caffeine rush and might not make sense. Still - this is fantastic.