I love it! It's very well written, and it does seem like what one of us would go through. But why are you afraid of white, if it's the true colour of death?

Your rhyming scheme reminds me of some of my works but it sounds so complete and there's no hanging thoughts. I like it and it's direct point. KUDOS! lol

_Kari

This is a very creative poem. Good job.

..Oh, and thanks for reviewing my poem! :)

Great poem about vampires. It's one of the best on this site! Great job!