well, im runnign out of things to say, but i really am in love with this. You have a great writing talent, keep it up.
~S

I have a writing style that to me is very similar to yours, so I can't but love yours. ;o)

I like the last stanza least, but that's only because it has so much to live up to (i.e. the two first stanzas that are really good).