I really liked this. it flows really well and your technique is great. The first line really drew me in! Great job! ~V

Wow! This is really well written! Great work, i really like it! _

So er...summary: -

A young girl compelled by the disappearance of her mother ventures into the attack. She is captivated with the objects from her past. An raven appears at the window, providing a warning, but she does not heed it. She goes to join her mother. (that's what happened, right?)

Anyway great work!

~Tamarisk~

NUNCA MAS! *cough, cough* yeah. Well, first you wanted a summary. Girl goes to attic out of curioussity after lulling guard asleep with Lewis Carrol. Thn finds many things from her birth. Next finds mother's things and a raven appaears. A raven her Nanny pointed out specifcally...hm...but, she goes through a photo album and gets trapped withing its pages, right?

I sure hope so. ANyways, I thought this was really good and doesn't need any changes. I didn't find any typos, but, then again, that doesn't say much. i really like and think its really cool. I also think the titles neat. I just read that and knew I needed to read it. My obsession with this poem may be slightly unhealthy. BTW, you probably know this, but for those who don't, Nunca Mas is nevermore in spanish. I like spanish. maybe because it is the only other language i know and it sounds so cool. Whatever, I'm rambling now. Bye, and good luck!

Youve got amazing writing style and technique. you are amazingly descriptive and the words just seem to flow. The only problem is the length. it goes on for far too long, with nothing really happening.