|Reviews for End End End|
| Celestial Sailor chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
Err.. so.. thickly dark and saturated. Your repetition of words reinforces the strength of the overall poem, despite how short it may be, it is incredibly strongly impacting on the reader and author. It is not always how sophisticated a word is to get the most meaning out, sometimes the simplest words used effectively can be just as powerful.
There is a deeper message behind this and I urge Seras to contact me if she is comfortable discussing it.
| Deadwind chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
I know it's tough to go through bad times, and it's tough, if not tougher, to tell someone.
:hugs again: I hope you're feeling better
| SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
I don't know if 'enjoy' is the best word for the feelings this gave me, but it's certainly an emotive piece of work.
And I'm sure your friends understand!
If they don't, sod them and go find some new friends who will!
| Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
Wow...this is written in such a way that...it really moves u...aweseomeness! I can relate to the happy-go-lucky mask..ugh...anyway Love, Mia
PS: I used to be Queen of Twilight..just for the record, lol, sry for not reviewing lately..bin busy..
| ShadowGal chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
:shivers: Haunting. It's like a chant, almost, which is very fitting.