Reviews for Mergirl |
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![]() ![]() Update please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! This story is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good story. Publish more, please. |
![]() ![]() Please update! I love this story and I'm dying to read whats next! No rush, I just hope you've forgotten about it. Keep up the good work!Mer-girl reader! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. I hope you update soon, it's really interesting and your good at your at going on my Favourite Authors _ Japan rulz! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() You rock! i always enjoy your story! keep it up and please write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, a tip for writing: Show, don't tell. You come out and say Justin Has a crush on Chrystyn, well, show us him having a crush on her! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah. Nice start. I'd go back and revise the wording of this, make it a little less awkward, but this is still good, and you should at least finish it first! Keep writin'! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU ARE COMPLETELY AMAZING! I SERIOUSLY CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE! |
![]() ![]() Of course it's not over! I definately intend to write more, as soon as my damned writer's block is gone, I promise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT? it's OVER? NO!ohwell, write more soon please! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU ROCK! I LOVE THIS STORY WITH A MAJOR PASSION AND IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING AGAIN! PLEASE KEEP WRITING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey this is really good. Is it finished cause if it's not you should finish it, reading it makes you wanna no what's going to happen. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, this is good... found it on a search looking for somethings else. Can't wait for more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are so awesome! i love your story and i'm so glad you updated! keep up the amazing writing! |