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![]() ![]() ![]() At first this was sad, but as the man described how his mother died it became downright chilling. You conveyed the man's emotions so well. Just a couple of suggestions. First, there's no need to include the assignment info at the top of the page. Second, if you broke the man's soliloquy into a few paragraphs, it might be easier to read. This was good! ~Zell |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kewl Im gonna do a play too, not for english class, I have the colest teacher, but a contest. lol niggles,aka doddlebug,aka dorkbuster |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an intriguing play. The atmosphere is built up very well, and you get a real sense of the man's derangement. It's just a pity that there isn't more of it. If extended this could turn into a real dark masterpiece. |