|Reviews for black hole heart|
| utopian sky chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
that settles it. you is me and i is you. zee end.
| Lady Marie chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
I think you should've made the poem longer, because the short lines don't quite convey the message you were trying to get out.
But a nice poem nethertheless.
You are to be congratulated.
| Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
I can totally relate to this story. I started reading this because the title interested me but now I am very happy I did. I would suggest turning this into a short story because you could be very descriptive with this but poetry can convey so much emotions. Excellent job with this.