Reviews for Can You See?
Gethsemane of the Stream chapter 4 . 3/5/2004
aw!
That was SO good. Cute too.
I read the first poem, then had to read the second. "Oh, look, there's a third...and fourth!"
Yeah, I liked these a lot.
Keep it up!
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Will kill for money,
Gethsemane of the Stream
Lori Brennan chapter 1 . 12/19/2003
She must have waited so long for him to make the first move and notice her. She took his simple request as a key to open her emotions. I enjoyed it.
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 4 . 12/15/2003
I love all the parts so far...can't wait for part 5.
KawaiiCookie chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
Wow! This was really fun to read! I like how all the lines rhymed with every other line. A Short and sweet nifty little poem. (I can't believe I just said 'nifty'. .') You should definatly do a part two/saga. Something for you to do in math class, and something for me to do whilst I should be studying for biology.