Reviews for The Forever Pure Element
hazelspirit chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
That is a really pretty poem! I don't usually like when poems rhyme, but you seem to make it work.
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
Very good! Keeps the reader interested, and the title is beautiful, too.
aireona93 chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Great poem! I am looking forward to reading the rest of them!
brunette chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
i love your elemental poetry. you seem to almost know nature, as if it was a person. hm.. good job.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
YAY! WATER! LOL as you can see, i've changed my penname and i think it suites me, whatcha think?
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
Very cool way to describe water.
Heart of the Sword
lebuffle chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
I like the last too rhymes. You've got a really good rhythm and rhyme pattern to that. Well done!
LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
Hum...Very interestin, well written poem. I like it, I like it. And I understand this poem well too. Great job! Keep writing!

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