Reviews for End of Days
DudettRin101 chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Really Kewl.
katmonkey chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Brilliant poem, I like the metaphors.
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
That's it! That's it! I surrender!

You are on my favourites list now and nobody can STOP ME!

Again, another great poem. It's so full of emotion and it touched me deeper than any of yours have before..Great job.

Much of Love-Suicidal_Greeting

"...Blood is thicker than water..."
flowerthief chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
OOh I like. Nice pen name by the way.
confused being99 chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
I love it. thanx Ian. Incase you dont recognise "confused being99" its marnina This is by far my favorite poem. Keep writing. Its in your soul
Sinister Shadow chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
I like it! I'm not too sure why but I do!

I really like how you twisted the whole heart break idea into a happier idea even if you did bring it straight back towards bad feelings by the end of the second line.

I like the metaphors and noticed that you had some hidden ones too.

Overall I think it's a well written piece that had a lot of thought go into it.