Reviews for Partners in Hell |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! i just read your story and i think it is awesome but you haven't updates in 2years and i think that's sad. please continue writing! people really enjoy your writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool story...i definetly want to see how it turns out...update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This story's good! Update soon! (I know you haven't updated for a year but...no harm tryin') |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why didn't you make this into a short story or something rather then put it on with this story..or does it go with it? Anyways I like the story with the secret agents..that is awsome! I hope you add the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, its me again, i only just realised how to sign in for a signed review (new to FP) This story as i said, is so good, I just don't get the sixth chappie...? Anyway - update (Oh and if you want, read my very crap story and review - critism accepted - I'll probably remove the story and start a new one) |
![]() ![]() This is really good, you must update quickly. i love those hate-love relationships especially when they're about teenage secret agents! Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was cool, but really, I thinkit was just a little predictable. It was good, sure, but predictable. Most stories like this end one of two ways: the main character dies, or somebody stops them. Really easy to guess at. Good story. Keep it up! Later, Sharon |
![]() ![]() ![]() COOL! I like Maia. She's awesome, mostly because I don't like wimpy main characters. It my characters start out wimpy, they toughen up. Like Maia. She's cool! Liam's an ass. Good chapter! Later, K.S. Night |
![]() ![]() But...Lent's been over for like...three months. T_T I can't wait until you update again, I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok i think im lost...i read chapter 6 and i was lost well i read half of the letter till i realised i had no idea who the hell Nathan was then i realised that it was another story or something P i can be really slow sometimes lol sorry anywayz...i didn't read this chapter sorry i have reasons though! (1) i have to get off my laptop soon so i was hoping for another chapter of 'Partners in Hell' but hey (2) i think my laptops about to run out of battery and (3) i wanted to write a review so i could tell you that i thikn ur story rox and you should keep writing and also to add you to my fav stories list LOL i know im sad P anwayz im off :D:D byee *waves* UPDATE! :D |
![]() ![]() This is great but it's already the end of Lent and you haven't posted! Update. |
![]() ![]() no thats not fair. you can't give up stuff that will make other people unhappy and i'm going to tell mommy that I'M UNHAPPY. haha. these stories aren't bad. i still want my translation tho. i will sob in my closet until lent is over and u write. ~kitsune clones rock-THEY REALLY DO! |
![]() ![]() zoraida's a cool name. I want to be a zoraida. MOMMY MAKE ME A ZORAIDA! lol. this was a great chap. i luv your fight scence. why is maia so intense in her opinion bout not being cornered tho? and WHAT HAPPENED TO THE SPANISH TRANSLATION? ~kitsune clones rock-THEY REALLY DO! |
![]() ![]() woah. intense. this was a great chap. poor maia and liam. they got some chemistry goin' on tho! haha. ~kistune clone rock- THEY REALLY DO! |