Hey, you're really talented. You should see if you can get your work published...you have enough poems to compile a book.

This truly portrays our world. No critisism, no complaints. Keep writing.
~Toki Kibbles _~

You're the first person I've added to my fave author list _
Another incredible piece. Terrorism and pouty children... Hehe.
Gorgeous turn of phrase, and I quite like that you do not over-glorify any of the roles... Great stuff _~

A very clever way of putting everything together - the advert style. Brilliant, original. Nothing seems out of place. Hits you right in the face - great way of getting your ideas across. Well done

wow, omg, you've written this so well, its just so honest. I love it