Throbbingly powerful. It's an overdone dubject, but this was really really good. The rhyme scheme/rhythm seemed natural, as well, which is hard to do. Kudos.
~lyv

Hey, nice poem, it does give a bit of a sense of what happens, of the crime. Lol, I'm desperate, I was wondering if you could read/review my poems? *feels desperate* it's okay if you say no, I'll really understand. But nice poem, keep up the good work!

This DOES give a sense of what is happening. Such a terrible crime! I took "Psychology of Women" and so I heard about rape. That is is not about sex but about taking power away from someone else (like a vampire?)
Also, I was teased in school, so I learned not to hurt others as if I ever would have anyway.
Nice work.

Very Powerful. Beautifully written

hey

wow i love this poem it makes the situation almost ironic and dark which of course it is.

deep dark, and mind blowing

wow

well done

Oh wow that's just...wow. This should not be rated G like it is. However, I still love this. Please keep writing.