Reviews for Obscure & Obscene: A collection of haikus
The Zaniak chapter 3 . 1/8/2004
I didn't like this lot. There was pretty much no randomness, except for the last line of Epiphany (by the way, what is "relived"?) and that was stolen from the first lot.
And I think that you vastly overrated this piece, I have worse stuff in some of my poems, and I rate them PG-13 at most.
The Zaniak chapter 2 . 1/8/2004
Well...the last one made me laugh. But again, a bit too random for me. More structured than the last lot, however.
The Zaniak chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
I admit...it made me laugh. But I like Haikus to be less random than some of these were, and more structured.
DeadPenName chapter 3 . 1/7/2004
Wow these were ridiculous.
You've got a vocab on you as well! I'm a sucker for funny stuff. Keep it up!
EK smooshie-huggle-kins to your glomp glomp *snatch*
frugale chapter 2 . 1/6/2004
Chapter Two contains the best ones. Nice stuff, just keep writing.
DeadPenName chapter 2 . 12/23/2003
Wow, I love funny haikus. Especially "Slake", that really struck my funny bone with a blunt object.
Misanthrope chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
Wow, I have so many things to say that I think I'll make a list.
you for the review. I like to get reviews. :D
2.j00 kn0w 1337. j00 pwn.
I read your review, I was listening to Nobuo Uematsu. FF9. *drool*
4.I started writing haikus last night. They made me laugh. Your haikus also made me laugh. They remind me very much of my haikus. But I know my haikus suck, whereas yours have depth and do not suck. They make me laugh because they are funny, not because they suck, like mine. :D
majors are awesome. They have my respect. Therefore, it is a reasonable assumption that you, as an English major, have my respect. It is correct.
This is great. I'm going to read more of your stuff now.
Not So Soft chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
"Warmth"

Nice hobo jacket

Where did all this hair come from?

Please don't answer that

that one is my favourite! Youre awesome
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