|Reviews for My Sweet Prince|
| Her Head In the Clouds chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
I loved this. And not a cliched ending like most, but realistic.
| kuripot chapter 2 . 9/26/2011
OMG! This is great! LUV IT!
| Queen Anabella chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Aw, how sad. :(
| atreyu love chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
its really sad :( but good all the same.
| The Latest Plague chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
this is hot! i love this! its just so deep and WOW! i am jelous of your mad writing skills! lol i'm adding this to my favorites list!
| Anotherlovesickteen chapter 2 . 3/23/2005
Screw what that reviewer said i think this is one the sweetest stories i have ever read and i go on this site every day!
| Sokorra Lewis chapter 2 . 6/16/2004
Interesting story. When did it take place? another question I have is Was the Pharaoh a real pharaoh or one you made up?
eitherway, it was a good one-shot.
| nahbia chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
| Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 2 . 12/4/2003
This...I...this is...beautiful...much different than your usual works, though it still retains the tone of sweet, bitter melancholy so signature of you, it's harsher than your general things...(not to place a stereotype to you dear; you hardly fit into one). Anyway. ...Ah, too much to say in one tiny box. The imagery you use is impeccable; enchantingly and sorrowfully divine; the end result almost reminiscent of a burnt out star...personally I would say this transcends anything else I've read by you, actually by quite a step. (And yes, I am getting around to your fanfictions, but...craploads of personal turmoil to deal with...) To comment: what gave that indivdual the idea of early new kingdom...? Nothing in here suggests a distinct time period, (I rather liked the pretty vagueness of the entire work, when reading it one sort of feels like one is wandering through a moonlit mist, but it grows thicker, darker, more evil by the end...I don't know; I'm in a very strange mood at the moment...) though, I did wonder why you named the prince Aten, a title of one of the Gods. Actually, he was proclaimed the the sun god (and sole god of Egypt) during the reign of Akenaten- oh, THAT might've been why the person assumed a time period for the story. He did rule in the early New Kingdom, hon. Heh, perhaps you should look into things before bashing on someone. But anyway: wondrous work; I look forward to some updates in other works/new stories. (That was the polite form of UPDATE, DAMN IT!) Eheh, I'm done. ::coughs herself to death::
| parakiss caroline chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
awesome story! i loved it, Egypt rocks!
| sakura chapter 2 . 11/29/2003
So you are going to write more. Can't wait. Update soon.
| Sorato4ever1 chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
wow, that was so sweet and sorrowful at the same time.
what's the word...bittersweet.
That's how i would describe this story.
| Punk'd chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
God...I'm so JEALOUS of YOU!
u write so bloody well...
check my fic
it's called Daughter of the Devil
and kudos to Tom as well!
| Bob n Kazzi chapter 2 . 11/29/2003
Bob: Someone pissed Ishuzu off! Hoo hoo they are in for it, lol.
*hits Bob* sh! Tell 'em Ishuzu, and I am sendin ad vibes. .
| nagenya chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
Ah...a little corny and cliche at the end, but still the lines "I was your refuge...am I still? etc." is very touching...overall it is a pretty good story. :-)