Whoa...wicked wicked deep.
Very nice.

*applauds* Very very very good! *is reminded of how her writing pales in comparison* Ah well...can't wait to read more! Update soon!

Wow...it's almost creepy at how vivid you paint the silence and loneliness. I got a chill sown my back when I read this. Great job! I'm expecting nothing but greatness from ya!

noice.I really hope theres more coming, I'm guessing there is, but I'm odd like that. This is really quite good, it reminds me of a Cristopher Pike book, don't remember what its called, but it was good, and this promises to be the same.
Aloha,
KitaKat