|Reviews for In Jersey, facing South|
| Wrathful Diana chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
You did a great job on this, I like how you made the character seem ordinary and unique at the same time, perhaps you could give me some advice on my poems in the fic "Welcoming Darkness" I have yet to reach your level of skill.
~Toki Kibbles _~
| sunkist deathmints chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
Wow. That's really beautifully written and I love the concept. It sounds like a short story.
| dawningfear chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
This is an excellent piece. The fourth stanza is positively awesome. "covered
with her steady palmprints and
ink smears like remnants of nightfall." Those lines taste beautiful. And the lack of angst makes me want to dance.
Excellent work _~