|Reviews for Mars|
| Susanita chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
I honestly think this is the best poem you've written so far. It's absolutely perfect in every sense...Has a lovely regular rhyme and a soft melody to it (at least in my ears) It's eloquent and carefully constructed...The imagery and portrayal of feelings are lovely, it makes the reader connect with everything you feel. Can't help but give it a 10/10. My Favourite! Excellent!
| It was not enough chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
I liked this I often to find myself looking at objects thinking about her and what she liked and the things we used to I dont wanna remember it and over time Ill try to forget it But i wont and cant let go either so yeah
Please review some of mine if you can
| Blood And Brown Sugar chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
I really enjoyed reading this one, the words had a nice floew to them and I could also connect with what you were writing about.