Reviews for and then i
alexzhia chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
Beautiful flowing imagery. Yes, the vagueness is left to the reader to decide whether it is f/f or m/f, but the ambiguity is part of what's nice about your writing. The words that are not spelled out leave the reader to imagine their own interpretation - as with the title and your last line, "And then I fell." Nice job.
StarsOverWonderland chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
i like it-alot.