Reviews for The Voices in My Head
CaffeineTed chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
This is a good poem. I like a lot of lines, but some things, some little bits and phrases make it seem a little bit worse, take you out of the mood. I love the last stanza: "Will you stand up and step out of the coffin closing over your mind Release me, release yourself, and one day you will find salvation" thats an amazing part. However, there are some parts in the middle that kinda ruin the mood for me. I like it though, its awesome. And youre not crazy. From someone who is bordering on insanity, really, you're not.