Reviews for upon being found
pennydeath chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
Echoing aleppine - this sounds like a song. The repitition is perfect...etc. The POEM is perfect. Brilliant.
aleppine chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
The title is perfect.
The title is perfect.
The title is perfect.
Now that we've estalished that, we can move on ...
... We? *looks apologetic*
This feels like a song. Either that or a kind of mantra. It's so simple and yet has contained within the words that all-consuming inner magnitude that is love. Meep! *sighs* The repetition is beautiful, and did I mention the title?
Thanks for a great start to the day.
Meep!
YC Bait chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
I loved this poem. It's really feeling and full of meaning.
DeerDance chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
This is brilliant! I really feel this and its one of those pieces of writing that is capable of letting the reader relate. I love the way you set out your work to, its really individual.
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
Ah, that was divine! Her adoration seeps beautifully through every word. I loved how the verses flow, and the cryptic language that you used. A great, original poem. You definitely have talent. Two thumbs up! b_d
Would you consider reading "A Bridal Song"? I'd like to hear from you.