|Reviews for Sal' Haria|
| shiloh fire chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
may i suggest leaving a review with a certain palestrina?
| Mara L. Blake chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
I stumbled on your story by accident, and I'm already really glad I did. You have a surprisingly elegant, sad writing style, which is beautiful. The first chapter is nicely set up, leaving the reader wanting to know more. The history of Nausicca is especially interesting, and I'm intrigued by AAralyn. (By the way, the names you came up with are just downright pretty. :D) The only thing I found that could be changed is the line "Then, he touches the stem..." I'm not sure if you meant to, but the 'touches' is in present tense, while the rest is past. Just thought I'd point it out! Overall, I'd say you have real talent, so keep up this series of books!
~ Mara ~
| Duchess of Serendair chapter 7 . 12/30/2003
Type more soon! Excellent descriptions. I hope I don't get nightmares. _