Reviews for I've Tried
Your cousin chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
We've always loved you and always will!
Tormented Romantic chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
Sometimes it's just not worth it to even matter what they're gunna find some reason to critisize and judge. Overall, there wasn't as much figurative language as there could've been and some of the word choice seemed rather...for lack of a better word...plain but all and all the emotion was obvious and the line breaks were very nicely done so everything flowed just perfectly. Keep up the good work.
Tears heal nothing chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
that is so sad! great poem, but sad! good job.
coldslit chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
everyone knows how this feels at some point. this was well expressed. the only thing that your family should need is the knowledge that you put in your best effort, if you do that, then it should be enough