Reviews for If
Soviet chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
Intresting fomrtaing but several longer lines killed the flow
Grevola chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
You have a nice steady rythm in this poem, though the rhymes can seem a bit forced in a few places. Oh well, happens to the best of us :P. I like it though, really shows the insecurities of not knowing what other people think, and I can relate.
Rocky G chapter 1 . 12/20/2003
To me it is a poem about questioning ones love. Well written!