Reviews for Alienated
Edraith chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
There is so much truth in this. Actually, the tone and allegorical nature of it reminded me of Bunyan's "Pilgrim's Progress"... ;-) I love the rhyme scheme; I wonder what it would be like if you made the rhythm completely regular as well, but the poem is great as it stands.
E A Tetje chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
I like the message and the symbolism that you have used in this poem. Some how it doesn't quite seem to flow prperly though, but as I have no suggestions on how to change this (if it needs to be fixed... it's probably just me) I will simply say it is good!
P.H. Wise chapter 1 . 12/12/2003
I like this one. Plenty of rich images, and it rhymes. It's not in meter, but that's not a criticism (nor is it a compliment - simply an observation).