Reviews for Mercy and Disgrace
Post Apocalyptic chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Very powerfeul. Good imagry, nice vocabulary use, just all around goo poem.
Valerie
Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
I feel privileged to read your poetry.
Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
This right here is some deep thinking. I am fascinated by the concept conveyed.
Spooni chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Such very powerful emotions and words! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderflly written. Again, the power, the conviction in the word choices: very impressive.
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
Cool...I like it!
MauledBarbie chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
i love the feeling of this poem and some lines (such as the last one) really speak to me. the only probelm is that it needs more rythm. some of the sentances need to be split up to read better. and the line 'it no compassion' makes no sense to me. im sorry to critisise. i really do like the poem though. good job, keep writing! and thank you for reviewing my work.