Reviews for Fallen
Shadowz the Silver Wolf chapter 1 . 12/25/2003
i like _ i really like dis a lot _ thanx for da review btw
FearOfClowns chapter 1 . 12/25/2003
I'm not spitting at god, and im not forcing my opinion on anyone else. im just saying that i question god when i get depressed.
Novus Orsus chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
I have to agree with butterfly here-I'm a religious person, and I don't like seeing God spit at like that. However, I think this was an honest, well-written poem, and if I were to see God being replaced with say, humans who tried to be like God, I would probably like it very much. I just hate seeing God being mocked like that.
Jackaroe chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
WOW! Sometimes i feel the same way when it seems as if no one understands me or what I am going through. I know I question God a lot when i am depressed. Great job! I loved this one!
Life's Angel
White-Mage-Of-Death chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
And as im falling
shoul be changed to
And as I am falling.
KAY?
Butterfly Radcliffe chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
I didn't like that. Have you ever considered that if you didn't suffer a little, you wouldn't be able to presieve true happiness? Plus, if you don't have suffering, you would never look to God at all. Suffering brings us closer to God. God is still powerful.